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Red Hot Beginnings 1.1

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First rebooted page.
Everyone say hello to my beta reader Skrayle Hopefully now my story will flow better, both script and story wise.
Bulbasaur is actually my favorite Kanto starter, but in the spirit of nuzlocke I chose my least favorite, charmander, for this run. In later nuzlockes I did, I decided that was rubbish and went with my favorites. 

RULES
Catch only first monster encountered in each new area
    3 duplicates may be ignored
Nickname every pokemon caught
Use all gift-pokemon for at least 3 battles
If a monster faints it is considered dead and must be boxed or released
    If monster faints by crithit, flip a coin to determine if it can come back as a ghost
    If all team monsters faint in one battle your pokemon license is on probation. If all faint in a gym battle, it is revoked and your journey is over. 
        Probation: cannot buy anything from Mart. For probation to be lifted you must win 10 battles with your new team. 



What is shading?

Notes
-trainers wear earpieces which, when synced with a pokedex, translate what their pokemon are saying. Since earpieces can only be synced to one pokedex at a time a trainer can only understand pokemon registered under their name. This includes traded pokemon.
-Gary and Daisy are twins. Their parents died in the great Cinnabar Fire that destroyed the old Cinnabar Lab when the twins were nine. They were scientists there, studying evolution. The Grayhavens (DJ's folks) helped Prof. Oak take care of Daisy and Gary. The Grayhavens joke about having "triplets"
-DJ's father is a researcher/ explorer. Almost an honorary Ranger. He works for Cinnabar Labs. He was luckily on a research trip at the time of the Fire. He's usually absent, and absent minded about important things. Like his only daughter beginning her journey. 
-DJ is 13 (I accidentally made her look older than she is oops) and the twins are 14. 
-The twins are going on their journeys because they hope to be world renown pokemon masters. DJ is going on her journey because it is mandatory for folks to have completed at least one league challenge before they can be accepted into "Ranger school", which is something DJ really wants to do. It also looks good on a resume if she ever wants to be a researcher like her pop.  

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I do think it looked a ton better with the pencil shading, to be perfectly honest. It's harder to see Hound's facial expression, and everything blends together more. I like the new chara designs though, super unique.

Also, have you seen how many people read your comics? It's awesome.